My perfect day
* english journal projectGrade 8 English Assignment: "My Perfect Day"
Objective: This assignment will help you practice writing descriptive essays and express your personal preferences and creativity.
Assignment: "My Perfect Day" Essay
Instructions:
- Write Your Essay:
- Imagine your perfect day. It can be a day you've already
experienced, a fantasy day, or a day you would design if you could.
Write a descriptive essay of 400-500 words about this day. Include:
- Introduction: Set the scene. Where does your perfect day take
place? What time of year is it? Who are you with?
- Body: Describe the events of your perfect day in detail. What
are you doing? What are the sights, sounds, and feelings? Use
vivid language to make the reader feel as if they are
experiencing the day with you.
- Conclusion: Reflect on why this day is perfect for you. What
makes it special? How does it leave you feeling?
- Introduction: Set the scene. Where does your perfect day take
place? What time of year is it? Who are you with?
- Imagine your perfect day. It can be a day you've already
experienced, a fantasy day, or a day you would design if you could.
Write a descriptive essay of 400-500 words about this day. Include:
- Include Sensory Details:
- Use sensory details to enhance your writing. Describe what you see,
hear, smell, taste, and touch to make your essay come alive.
- Use sensory details to enhance your writing. Describe what you see,
hear, smell, taste, and touch to make your essay come alive.
- Revise and Edit:
- After writing your first draft, revise it for clarity, coherence,
and detail. Check for spelling and grammar errors.
- After writing your first draft, revise it for clarity, coherence,
and detail. Check for spelling and grammar errors.
- Submission:
- Submit your final essay by __.
Evaluation Criteria:
- Descriptive Language: Use of vivid and sensory language to create a
clear picture of your perfect day.
- Organization: Clear structure with an engaging introduction,
detailed body, and reflective conclusion.
- Grammar and Mechanics: Correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar.
- Creativity: Originality and imagination in describing your perfect day.
Total Points: 20
Grading Scale:
- 18-20: Excellent
- 14-17: Good
- 10-13: Satisfactory
Below 10: Needs Improvement
1. My perfect Day.
1.1. Introduction
You wake up to the soft warmth of sunlight peeking through your bedroom window. The gentle morning light casts a light glow over your cozy bedroom, signaling the beginning of your day. As you slowly open your eyes, you feel refreshed after a good night's sleep. The world outside is quiet, except for the distant singing of birds, creating a peaceful atmosphere. You stretch your arms above your head, feeling ready to seize the day ahead. With a smile, you head to the kitchen to prepare a breakfast that will fuel your relaxing adventure.
1.2. Body
The microwave beeps, signaling that your Quaker oatmeal is ready. You carefully remove the steaming bowl and let it stand for a moment. The aroma of cooked oats fills the air, inviting you to take a bite. As you lift the spoon to your lips, the warmth of the oats contrasts pleasantly with the cooler air. The first taste brings a satisfying comfort, the soft texture coating your tongue. Though quick to prepare, this simple dish offers a moment of peace in your morning routine.
Satisfied with your hunger, you make plans to unwind for the day, creating a calm environment in your living space. You curl up in your favorite leather armchair with blankets and pillows all around you. Next, you engage in some journalism, allowing you to express deep thoughts and feelings without judgment. Afterwards, you pick up a book you've been wanting to read, "The Never Ending Story" becoming immersed in a world of heroes and monsters.You follow Atreyu on his journey to give the childlike empress a new name . As the day winds down, you prepare a homemade dinner and treat yourself to a relaxing hot shower. The warm water soothes your muscles, melting away any remaining tension. Feeling refreshed and rejuvenated, you call it a day and lie down on a warm water mattress.
1.3. Conclusion
Reflecting on this ideal day, you have treated all of your sense to enchanting experiences. From the fragrant aroma of oatmeal cooking to the peaceful atmosphere of relaxation and self-care. Every experience showed you the beauty of life's simple pleasures. The combination of flavors, textures, and scents has left you feeling grateful and fulfilled. You come to realize that perfection lies not just in grand adventures, but in the little things that make life worth living.
2. Elsewhere
2.1. References
2.2. In my garden
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